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容易获得高分的九种雅思写作开头句式

2017-06-05 15:48

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  如果文章的开头写得好,那么就会给评卷老师一个良好的印象,那么你的整篇文章分数自然也不会太低。下文跟各位烤鸭们分享,雅思写作考试中,容易获得高分的九种写作开头。

  1:呈现该话题正反方的观点

  例如在写到男性和女性谁可以做更好的父母时可以这样开头:

  At the mere mention of women governing the world, most of us may naturallyform an unrealistic picture of a more peaceful world where the sun alwaysshines. The other side of the picture, however, is just to the opposite.

  在开头提出两种不同的观点,不同的读者可以根据自己对问题的看法进行思考,从而引发读者的探究心理,进一步思考这个问题从而得出结论。

  2:对将要讨论的话题进行定义

  例如在写到Globalization时:

  Globalization-the international spread of products, ideas andinformation-is bringing the world closer together. But globalization is not anew concept. For thousands of years, nations have roamed the earth in search ofnew markets and new sources of raw materials for their own industries.

  关于"全球化"这个名词,考生并不陌生,但是怎样用合理的语言来赋予它一个含义,这并非易事,上述的引言段就很好地做到了这一点,先是从字面上诠释了"全球化"的定义,进而又从实际生活角度赋予了它另外一层含义。

  3:引用名人名言、谚语等作为文章的开头

  例如在写到先天跟后天哪一个更重要时,“Genius is two percent inspiration and ninety-eightpercent perspiration” is the opinion held by Edison. This remark has beenconfirmed time and again by more and more people.

  “天才是百分之二的灵感,百分之九十八的汗水”是爱迪生的观点,而且反复被越来越多的人所证实,通过引用名人名言揭示了文章的主题,为下文很好地做了铺垫。

  4:通过媒体报道把问题呈现在读者面前,引发思考

  例如在写关于该不该禁烟的话题时,可以这样开头:

  A recent study conducted by Zhongshan University has found that the numberof smokers has been increasing sharply over the pastfive years. Researchfindings also reveal that the incidence of smoking-related conditions hassoared. As a result, the ban on smoking has been in the spotlight.

  中山大学(分数线,专业设置)最近做的一个研究表明,在过去五年里,吸烟人数急剧上升。研究结果同时显示,吸烟导致的疾病发病率也急剧增长。因此,禁烟成为一个热点话题。这个开头通过媒体报道把问题呈现在读者面前,从而引出吸烟比例急剧上升造成的危害,引发读者思考。

  5:提出有争议性的问题,激发读者兴趣,使其积极参与讨论

  例如在写到警察是否应该持枪这篇文章时作者说:

  If police in the U.K. are able to go without guns and not have crimegetting completely out of control then they have already set a fine example thatother countries should follow. The fact that they are able to do this is anindication of their ability to control the flow of guns to the general populaceand this makes citizens safer than anything else. To a civilian, taking gunsaway from criminals is more important than giving them to police.

  提出这个有争议的话题,激发读者的兴趣,使读者积极参与到讨论中来,让大家各抒己见进行讨论。


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