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托福写作的好素材有哪些

2016-04-12 11:40

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“老师我实在不知道这个分论点咋举例啊啊啊啊所以就写不出干货车轱辘话来回转啊啊啊”

  这个是很多人对于托福独立写作的一大怨念。实在不好意思老写隔壁的小明小钢小红或者Jack, David, Jessica, 总觉得来点名人事迹逼格更高嘛。

  说到名人事迹,好吧,盖茨乔布斯莫扎特马丁路德金爱迪生...华盛顿的樱桃树(假的),牛顿的小苹果...咱不嫌太sú了么

  还有,你用就用吧,记得别把乔布斯写成SteveQiaobusi...另外,用乔布斯当例子,你得知道Macintosh是啥,Graphical interface operating system 是啥吧,否则写出来毫无干货。最简单的方法是上Wikipedia找自己喜欢的,人生经历比较丰富的名人,看英文简传。

  今天推荐一位不那么sú的名人:IT宅们的祖师爷,二战盟军的大功臣,人工智能理论的教父,以及...Gay界反歧视的代言人——艾伦图灵Alan Turing.

  对了,人家其实脸没有《模仿游戏》中的扮演者卷福那么长的:

  简单介绍:德艺双馨的数学家,逻辑学家,密码学家,计算机与人工智能科学家,生于1912,剑桥学士,普林斯顿博士,提出现代计算机原型模型基础,通过计算机帮助盟军破解德军核心密码系统,提出图灵测试构建人工智能理论体系,因同性恋获罪被强制注射激素,吃剧毒的咬了一口的苹果而死。

  详细介绍https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alan_Turing

  关键词computer science, cryptanalyst, algorithm, Turing machine, Turing test, artificial intelligence, Hut 8 of Government Code and Cypher School, Enigma machine, homosexuality, oestrogeninjection, cyanide poisoning.

  学以致用部分:输入了好素材,就要输出进机经啦

  题目Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: To succeed in the future, making challenging plans is better than practical plans.

  总论点:Yes

  分论点:Challenging plans provide different angle of view and innovative perspective to cope with the puzzle.

  举例部分:History abounds with such examples. During the Second World War, the army of Britain was greatly troubled by the Enigma machine which was used by Nazi Germany to encipher their communication. While other cryptanalysts endeavored to decipher it manually, Alan Turing, also known as the father of theoretical computer science andartificial intelligence, decided to tackle it depending on the algorithm of machines, which had never been done before. This was a challenging decision for sure, but the result proved its rationality: His machine worked, making sizable contribution to the triumph of the Ally.

  题目Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People now live a happier life than people in the past

  总论点:Yes

  分论点:The continuous increase in social equality and inclusiveness has made our life more enjoyable.

  举例部分:Intolerance in the past has faded away, leaving a brighter and more inclusive society. History witnesses numerous persecution of people with differences, among which the experience of Alan Turing is the most convincing one. Despite his unparalleled contribution to the triumphof the Second World War, he was convicted for homosexuality, a crime at that time, and forced to choose between prison and oestrogeninjection. This kind of prejudice and injustice will not happen again, with people becoming more ideologically advanced.

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