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解析|托福写作快速提分技巧

2017-10-09 18:00

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  托福写作不管怎么练习,都很难达到自己预期的效果,那么不妨换个思路。

  例子:

  To begin with, by no means are we supposed to lose sight of the fact that it is much easier for people to get access to information nowadays. Due to the proliferation of hi-tech devices, such as smart phones with Internet connection, education is no longer restrained into traditional classroom. To be more specific, not only are people able to obtain resources in an extremely short period of time, but also, thanks to the proGREssive technology of storing data, various kinds of information is available online. Therefore, students are bestowed with more opportunities of self-training in the long term. A salient example can be used here to illustrate my point of view. I used to hate doing research since searching for information always took me a long time. However, since several years ago, I began enjoying collecting resources online, such as E-books and others’ thesis, sometimes with my smart phone. To be honest, it is a way full of pleasure and convenience, which denotes that education is a lot easier today.

  很容易发现上面的文章结构,语言用词没有多么晦涩难懂,重点是结构比较清晰,字数也达标了,重点是有一些长难句式的套用,我们要说明一点:长句子不是ETS的最爱,但是长短句兼有确是作为一个语言类考试的必备条件;然而另外一篇没跑题且语法正确,长短句并存,后者肯定更受到考官青睐。

  在以上段落中,看到了高中常见语法中的倒装句,否定词在句首,可以使用部分倒装,部分倒装的结构是 情态动词/助动词+主语+剩余动词 ,举例如下:

  By no means are we supposed to lose sight of the fact that it is much easier for people to get access to information nowadays.

  Never should we ignore the importance of mental health on children’s development.

  此外,我们还可以看到not only在句首的倒装结构,Not only 倒装,but also 不倒装

  Not only are people able to obtain resources in an extremely short period of time, but also, thanks to the progressive technology of storing data, various kinds of information is available online.

  Only 放在句首,也是一个常见的倒装句结。

  Only by taking diverse jobs can we truly know our abilities and interests.

  另外一个:悬垂结构,称为SVO, doing./Doing, SVO在这个结构中,我们要求句子只有一个主语S,一个主句SVO,而doing可以理解成是主语S的动作,或者是SVO这个句子引发的伴随状态,充当状语部分,例句如下:

  Walking on the street, I met an old friend.

  Most people are busy in their daily life, earning more money for their families.

  Thinking of the fact that more people tend to study English, schools set up English groups.

  Considering the fact that sharing ideas with net friends with various backgrounds can lead to numerous precious information, students can draw more precise conclusions and make wiser decisions while chatting online.

  Being impressed by WTO, China’s economy is growing stronger.

  在最后这个句子中Being impressed by WTO, China’s economy is growing stronger. 是可以理解成主语China’s economy 和impressed是被动关系的,所以延伸出一个结构 SVO, done./Done, SVO.

  Impressed by WTO, China’s economy is growing stronger.

  高分托福写作,需要大家向高分句型、复杂句靠近,所以在备考期间建议各位托儿多多积累,并加以练习。

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